the message is
unmistakable
you think I’m
replaceable
I’ve never been
confrontational
but this time it’s
explainable
our bond was
educational
your lies were
unshakable
none of this is
debatable
the truth is not
erasable
although I am
capable
my trust is not
reclaimable
consequences
inescapable
I wish my emotions
unavailable
try to make them
untraceable
but peace is not
attainable
I remain
breakable
Note:
This is not written about anything specific currently transpiring in my life.
This is fiction. Mostly.
what sandra thinks 
ah I absolutely loved this..!! 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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Fiction or not, it’s brilliant Sandra. Great flow. Loved it! ❤️
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Thanks, M. ♥ I know it sounds sort of bitter and bitchy… but I’m trying to get out of my own head… away from my own stupid emotions which I really hate right now! Of course, I’m bitter and bitchy, too, so this may get me nowhere!
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Hey, you sound just like me … seriously, I can be mean and bitchy too, so don’t be so hard on yourself. We’ll be bitchy together. Hugs 🙂
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Sometimes, I try to lean toward bitchy… because on the other side… it’s sadness and tears… and, my God, I’m sick of that. (Haven’t figured out how to fix that part yet…)
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Just go with it Sandra, embrace all of it, the bitchiness, the sadness, the tears, the highs (gotta look for them too) and just let things be … one way or another you’ll get there. xo
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I sure as hell hope so because the journey hasn’t been much fun!
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Oh my. Wow. 💕
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Thank you, Sarah. ♥
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That’s a very creative and cool to let it out. Love the rhyming.
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Thanks, M. (Mind if I call you M?) (By the way, I finally emailed you back…)
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Got it. Replied. Sorry I think I got a little side tracked (weeks of not sleeping well)
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I totally understand…
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So creative Sandra!💕
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Thank you! ♥
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Loved this! Been there, done that.
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Thanks… Some universal thoughts and emotions, I think…
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Unfortunately, yep. 😃
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Remarkable 😉
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Thanks!
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I love it. I know I say this a lot but I like the clever construction as well as the content. You have a way with words, my girl. ❤
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Thanks, Meg. You can say things as many times as you want. You know, the nice things. 🙂 Now, if only I could get some clever construction and decent content in my life off the page, well, that would be f-ing stupendous.
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Alright, I’ll keep saying it. And hey, we all wish our writing life could be real life… unless of course you’re writing about serial killers. Or horror stuff. Like election coverage…
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Well, that is definitely a horror show. But I don’t even mean my life being one I create in fiction… I mean is love my life to be well-constructed and with better content. ‘ Cause right now it bites…
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Aw, I knew what you meant… Now, how to find better construction materials. And hot construction workers…
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Really! (And I’m sorry I’m so bitchy and down… I seem to be in hell… I think that’s just what it’s like here…)
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It’s ok, you’re allowed to be any way you want. I don’t scare off very easily! xoxo
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I wouldn’t say I WANT to be this way… But I know what you mean. I’m just a getting a bit concerned about how long I’ve been this way. It’s excessive, even for me…
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Love this, Sandra! Awesome poem and relatable. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Emily!
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Beautiful poem Sandra. We’re all a little broken, we’re just broken a little different. I hope things are going a bit better for you a bit. Have a great week!
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Thanks, Mandi. I hope you have a great week, too.
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Sandra, we all feel that way sometimes. Love the ebb and flow of emotions hope you’re ok my friend and unbroken, love and peace forever from me to you xoxo
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You’re very kind… thanks very much, Dave.
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I love the rhyme, rhythm, and assertive tone in this one.
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Thank you M… I’ve been sitting on this one for a while. I finally revisited and edited…
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It paid off! ❤
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Thanks ♥
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That’s talent right there.
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Me? You mean me? 😉 Thank you…
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