the message is
you think I’m
I’ve never been
but this time it’s
our bond was
your lies were
none of this is
the truth is not
although I am
my trust is not
I wish my emotions
try to make them
but peace is not
I remain

This is not written about anything specific currently transpiring in my life.
This is fiction. Mostly.

© 2016 what sandra thinks

About what sandra thinks

Sandra is a writer, blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Italy, but she would settle for a non-oceanfront home in Italy, too. She loves books, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
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41 Responses to breakable.

  1. Aamena says:

    ah I absolutely loved this..!! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Miriam says:

    Fiction or not, it’s brilliant Sandra. Great flow. Loved it! ❤️

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Halycon Prana says:

    That’s a very creative and cool to let it out. Love the rhyming.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Marquessa says:

    So creative Sandra!💕

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Loved this! Been there, done that.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. paul says:

    Remarkable 😉

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Meg Sorick says:

    I love it. I know I say this a lot but I like the clever construction as well as the content. You have a way with words, my girl. ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Emily says:

    Love this, Sandra! Awesome poem and relatable. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  9. mandibelle16 says:

    Beautiful poem Sandra. We’re all a little broken, we’re just broken a little different. I hope things are going a bit better for you a bit. Have a great week!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Sandra, we all feel that way sometimes. Love the ebb and flow of emotions hope you’re ok my friend and unbroken, love and peace forever from me to you xoxo

    Liked by 1 person

  11. magarisa says:

    I love the rhyme, rhythm, and assertive tone in this one.

    Liked by 1 person

  12. wheredoesthisend says:

    That’s talent right there.

    Liked by 1 person

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