erased. #poetry

writing in darkness

I wrote the words
without knowing
what I wanted to say
and in the end
I hated every one
so I erased them all.

 

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About what sandra thinks

Sandra is a writer, blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Hawaii where she could learn to surf. She loves books, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
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60 Responses to erased. #poetry

  1. πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

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  2. Olga says:

    I get writer’s block myself and erase the words, but then I start with new ones. Loved your poem. ❀

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  3. 😦 I feel like this is sad. But still cool.

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  4. robertseye says:

    I think that most of the best writings are about sadness. And I love it!! Just few simple words with big meanings.

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  5. Ogden Fahey says:

    Strangely, I like what you did write, it speaks of volumes! XX

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  6. so short but so much in it πŸ™‚

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  7. naturemithya says:

    With no mind words come from the heart;
    Can there be a heart that hates when the mind is ready to erase?
    Like the emotions!

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  8. silentstrong says:

    I’ve done this countless times. I have about 30 drafts saved. Sometimes words just cannot express the strong feelings inside.

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  9. Love this so much, very relatable

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  10. Jod🌺 says:

    I love this😍 was on my birthday too πŸ™‚

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  11. That does happen to me so many times!

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  12. Been there, done that lol.

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  13. Soul On Rice says:

    Great piece!
    Keep it up.
    God bless.

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  14. This is so relatable. Thank you for putting it into words πŸ™‚

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  15. justforscribs says:

    It’s funny how a couple words can speak volumes. Takes real talent to portray something so relatable in just a few words.

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  16. jcaesar03 says:

    beautifuly written

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  17. Sage Spirit says:

    Sandra, Short, concise and to the point. A poem made for poetry as understood in this way. Lovely. Insta-poets were not on your list of the unfavoured. On mine possibly. I’m still thinking that one over. πŸ˜‰

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