my strength faded
nearly gone
my will to hang on
has run from me
I’m losing my balance
this branch cannot
hold me forever
the heaviness
of my lonely heart
weighs me down
in mere moments
the violent crack
will scream
into the silence
deafening me
and the last trace
of my strength
will break
and the last piece
of my heart
will break
and I
will break
can I help you find something?
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You just need to hang on a little longer ❤
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Oh, where loneliness is concerned, there’s barely anything left to hold on to… sigh.
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Heart breaking for you 🙁
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Someday I’ll just stop bothering to hope things will change. Just leads to more disappointment and pain.
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Just get through August one day at a time… ❤
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You’ve expressed loneliness and desperation so beautifully. I also feel at times that I’m hanging on by a mere thread…
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Thanks… and I’m sorry you understand that feeling… because it truly sucks… ♥
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💜💜
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There is a chord in me you have struck.
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I am flattered to know I’ve touched something in you… but sad that it’s this painful thing.
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Marvelous post
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Thanks very much
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My pleasure. Remember to smile cause you matter
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🙂
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Beautiful and yet so sad !
I know it’s not , but please let me pretend these are the words of one of your fictional characters 😉
Turtle Hugs
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Yeah it seems only the happy ones are fictional
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“The time will come , one day you’ll see ” when all you can write about is happy and for your less happy characters you will have to go back to your older scribblings to copy because not a single sad thought will come to your mind 🙂
So write away , write a lot 🙂
Hugs from the almost always hopeful Turtle ❤
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Thanks for being so kind to me. I’ve missed our “talks”. Hugs to you, too… 🐢
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❤
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Sometimes I find myself mentally preparing for the worst-case scenario (such as being alone forever) so that if/when it happens, maybe it won’t hurt as much. It’s really no way to live, though, is it? Anyway, hugs for you. Hope things improve for you soon.
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The worst part is… I’m not alone. Just lonelier than I’ve ever felt in my life…
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I wouldn’t wish that feeling on anyone 😦
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Me neither!
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Oh sweetie. I’m so sorry. Your poem is so heartbreaking. 😥
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I feel like I’m just done. And exhausted.
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I’ll be in touch.
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I’m sorry you’re feeling so down, Sandra. I wish I could help you. I just have virtual hugs to offer. ❤️❤️ *hugs
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It’s okay. There are just some things that can’t be fixed. And I appreciate the hugs very much. ♥♥♥
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Last piece of my heart will break and I will break.. This is indeed deep.
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Thank you so much
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Well written poem. Maybe you’re stronger that you think? Sometimes we are sure our support system, our lives, will shatter, but there is strength in us, we never knew existed before we were tested.
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Yes. Some days I feel stronger than other days.
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Yes, I know the feeling sometimes. Hope today is good day 🙂
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🙂
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