oh honey. #poetry

Oh. My. God. I wrote a fucking poem!

I haven’t written a poem since October of last year. But I wrote one. I know, right? I can’t believe it myself.

do you remember
how perfect we were?
the first time you touched me
oh honey, I was sure

we had everything
it happened so fast
our love came easily
oh honey, you were my last

but maybe for you
the memories died
or only the bad endured
oh honey, I hurt inside

too good to be true
that tore us apart
of course I cried for you
oh honey, you broke my heart


©2019 what sandra thinks



About what sandra thinks

Sandra is a writer, blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Hawaii where she could learn to surf. She loves books, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
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37 Responses to oh honey. #poetry

  1. Cyranny says:

    Welcome back on the horse, Gorgeous 🙂 It is nice to see you write again… xx

    Liked by 1 person

  2. A poem from you is like the gold at the end of a rainbow. 😉

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  3. The V Pub says:

    Beautifully melancholy. Loved it!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Carol Anne says:

    That’s brill! Welcome back to wp too hun! xo

    Liked by 1 person

  5. jackcollier7 says:

    Great poem. Poignant and bitter. 💖

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  6. Wait. What’s this? I smell…..inspiration? 🤔

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  7. Yay!
    Don’t leave it so long until next time.

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  8. Yay a new poem!! 💛💛

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  9. TiaWojo says:

    🤠That sounds like old time country music lyrics.


  10. Hunida says:

    So happy to see this poem from you, Sandra! ♡

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Wow so sweet of you… nice poem..

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  12. mydangblog says:

    It’s really emotive–as someone said above, very poignant. Excellent!

    Liked by 1 person

  13. very beautiful, relatable and gets me right in the feels

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