blush.

Posted on 11 September 2016 by what sandra thinks

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The look in your eyes makes me blush… and
Every time you touch me I melt inside
I love your smile when you take my hand
The look in your eyes makes me blush… and
I adore your fingers sweeping the strand
Of my hair aside, out of my eyes
The look in your eyes makes me blush… and
Every time you touch me I melt inside

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(This is a triolet — eight lines with repeated lines and a rhyming scheme of ABaAabAB.)
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra is a writer, sometimes blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Italy, but she would settle for a non-oceanfront home in Italy. She loves books, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
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27 Responses to blush.

  1. Rashmi's avatar Rashmi says:
    11 September 2016 at 11:00 am

    nice poem.. 🙂

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  2. deleted's avatar VictoryInTrouble says:
    11 September 2016 at 12:23 pm

    So many sighs. Lovely.

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  5. Meg's avatar Meg Sorick says:
    11 September 2016 at 3:49 pm

    This is a lovely poem. I like the triolet structure. Nicely done!

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  7. constellation_005's avatar Al saher says:
    12 September 2016 at 12:08 am

    Beautiful…. 😊

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  9. Miriam's avatar Miriam says:
    12 September 2016 at 8:08 am

    Really lovely Sandra.

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  10. Mandibelle16's avatar mandibelle16 says:
    12 September 2016 at 6:49 pm

    Love his Sandra. Very nice how the blushing repeats, emphasizing it.

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  11. Cakeordeath's avatar cakeordeathsite says:
    13 September 2016 at 9:09 am

    Fancy versification… Well done and I have leant something new . Thank you

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