blush.

hands

The look in your eyes makes me blush… and
Every time you touch me I melt inside
I love your smile when you take my hand
The look in your eyes makes me blush… and
I adore your fingers sweeping the strand
Of my hair aside, out of my eyes
The look in your eyes makes me blush… and
Every time you touch me I melt inside

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(This is a triolet — eight lines with repeated lines and a rhyming scheme of ABaAabAB.)
@2016 what sandra thinks
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra is a writer, blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Hawaii where she could learn to surf. She loves music, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
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27 Responses to blush.

  1. Rashmi says:

    nice poem.. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  2. VictoryInTrouble says:

    So many sighs. Lovely.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Meg Sorick says:

    This is a lovely poem. I like the triolet structure. Nicely done!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Al saher says:

    Beautiful…. 😊

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Miriam says:

    Really lovely Sandra.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. mandibelle16 says:

    Love his Sandra. Very nice how the blushing repeats, emphasizing it.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Fancy versification… Well done and I have leant something new . Thank you

    Liked by 1 person

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