blush.

hands

The look in your eyes makes me blush… and
Every time you touch me I melt inside
I love your smile when you take my hand
The look in your eyes makes me blush… and
I adore your fingers sweeping the strand
Of my hair aside, out of my eyes
The look in your eyes makes me blush… and
Every time you touch me I melt inside

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(This is a triolet — eight lines with repeated lines and a rhyming scheme of ABaAabAB.)
@2016 what sandra thinks
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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27 Responses to blush.

  1. Rashmi says:

    nice poem.. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  2. So many sighs. Lovely.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Meg Sorick says:

    This is a lovely poem. I like the triolet structure. Nicely done!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Al saher says:

    Beautiful…. 😊

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Miriam says:

    Really lovely Sandra.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. mandibelle16 says:

    Love his Sandra. Very nice how the blushing repeats, emphasizing it.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Fancy versification… Well done and I have leant something new . Thank you

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