haze.

Posted on 12 September 2016 by

sky

Nighttime clouds cast a blurry haze
Hiding the moon and the stars
Erasing those love swept days
Crushing the memory of your heart
Love has gone but the pain stays
Lost are those perfect nights of ours
Maybe I cannot truly recover
Until I am hurt by another

messy heart.

© 2016 what sandra thinks
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra is a writer, blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Hawaii where she could learn to surf. She loves music, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
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24 Responses to haze.

  1. Jeffrey says:
    12 September 2016 at 4:39 pm

    Wow! That’s an intensely powerful piece! That last line punched me in the gut!

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  2. Meg Sorick says:
    12 September 2016 at 4:44 pm

    Aw, until I am hurt by another? Maybe loved by another? So freaking passionately that you can’t even remember the other?

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  4. VictoryInTrouble says:
    12 September 2016 at 6:02 pm

    Beautiful but sad. The last line is unexpected and powerful.

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  5. ladieswholunchreviews says:
    12 September 2016 at 7:30 pm

    Ouch, so very sad. You ought to kick butt on a dark limerick this week!

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  6. mywords331 says:
    12 September 2016 at 11:51 pm

    A masterpiece and the picture is awesome too….

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  7. Miriam says:
    13 September 2016 at 8:34 am

    Sad, moving and very powerful all at once.

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

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