haze.

sky

Nighttime clouds cast a blurry haze
Hiding the moon and the stars
Erasing those love swept days
Crushing the memory of your heart
Love has gone but the pain stays
Lost are those perfect nights of ours
Maybe I cannot truly recover
Until I am hurt by another

messy heart.

© 2016 what sandra thinks
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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24 Responses to haze.

  1. Jeffrey says:

    Wow! That’s an intensely powerful piece! That last line punched me in the gut!

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Meg Sorick says:

    Aw, until I am hurt by another? Maybe loved by another? So freaking passionately that you can’t even remember the other?

    Liked by 2 people

  3. VictoryInTrouble says:

    Beautiful but sad. The last line is unexpected and powerful.

    Liked by 2 people

  4. Ouch, so very sad. You ought to kick butt on a dark limerick this week!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. mywords331 says:

    A masterpiece and the picture is awesome too….

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Miriam says:

    Sad, moving and very powerful all at once.

    Liked by 1 person

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