Nighttime clouds cast a blurry haze
Hiding the moon and the stars
Erasing those love swept days
Crushing the memory of your heart
Love has gone but the pain stays
Lost are those perfect nights of ours
Maybe I cannot truly recover
Until I am hurt by another
© 2016 what sandra thinks
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Sandra is a writer, blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Hawaii where she could learn to surf. She loves books, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
Wow! That’s an intensely powerful piece! That last line punched me in the gut!
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Thank you so much!
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Aw, until I am hurt by another? Maybe loved by another? So freaking passionately that you can’t even remember the other?
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Exactly! 😃
Oh, and by the way, Doc, thanks for the caps!!! Love, love, love the Trappist Westmalle!
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Oh, good you got them! 👍
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Yep, in the mailbox yesterday. Thanks! I’ll put a pic out when we use the Trappist caps. Stay warm over there. Looks a bit chilly in your pics. 😃
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Thanks! Yes the winds are ripping. Better today – sunny at least! 😃
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Good deal. 😃
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Sounds great… but you know, pipe dreams……
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It might involve some big changes, but it could happen.
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In my current life? Probably more chance I’ll sprout wings…
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So let’s get new ones. Lives that is…
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I’ll hop on over to Target this afternoon. Maybe they’re having a sale. 😛
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Beautiful.
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Thank you
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Beautiful but sad. The last line is unexpected and powerful.
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I love the end. I know it’s sad… but I am totally proud of those last two lines. I actually wrote them first.
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Ouch, so very sad. You ought to kick butt on a dark limerick this week!
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Yes, I need to do that one… I guess maybe it’s kind of sad that this is my specialty!
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Aww, no, not at all!!
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A masterpiece and the picture is awesome too….
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Thank you so much!
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Sad, moving and very powerful all at once.
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Thanks
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