unattainable: a limerick.

Posted on 14 July 2016 by what sandra thinks

rain.

The beautiful love I longed to attain
Blew away as if stolen by a hurricane
I searched but could not find
That which will never be mine
Now tears fall from my eyes like rain

Mind and Life Matters limerick poetry challenge – prompt: rain
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra is a writer, sometimes blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Italy, but she would settle for a non-oceanfront home in Italy. She loves books, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
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15 Responses to unattainable: a limerick.

  1. Meg's avatar Meg Sorick says:
    14 July 2016 at 11:00 am

    Awwww! 😞 Lovely writing though.

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  2. ladieswholunchreviews's avatar ladieswholunchreviews says:
    14 July 2016 at 11:20 am

    Blown away by your beautiful writing!

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  4. Kay's avatar Kay says:
    14 July 2016 at 11:41 am

    Beautiful.

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  5. Mandibelle16's avatar mandibelle16 says:
    14 July 2016 at 1:17 pm

    Beautiful.so sad 💕

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  6. Rashmi Menon's avatar MindandLifeMatters says:
    14 July 2016 at 7:08 pm

    Beautiful limerick! I can relate!

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  7. Mags's avatar magarisa says:
    15 July 2016 at 2:52 pm

    Bittersweet…great use of similes!

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