unattainable: a limerick.

rain.

The beautiful love I longed to attain
Blew away as if stolen by a hurricane
I searched but could not find
That which will never be mine
Now tears fall from my eyes like rain


Mind and Life Matters limerick poetry challenge – prompt: rain
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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15 Responses to unattainable: a limerick.

  1. Meg Sorick says:

    Awwww! 😞 Lovely writing though.

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  2. Blown away by your beautiful writing!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Kay says:

    Beautiful.

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  4. mandibelle16 says:

    Beautiful.so sad 💕

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Beautiful limerick! I can relate!

    Liked by 1 person

  6. magarisa says:

    Bittersweet…great use of similes!

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