
I always thought
. . .you were too perfect to be real
maybe that’s why
. . .I never believed you could feel
those things you said
. . .the sweet words spoken from your heart
and I gave up
. . .before we had a chance to start
falling in love
. . .like two strangers captivated
by something new
. . .we had never anticipated
now I’ve lost you
. . .and it’s too late to change the past
but the thing is
. . .I miss you and I know at last
we could have been
. . .so much more than I’ll ever know
you were the one
. . .I never should have let you go










I love this.
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Thanks! It’s interesting what comes out of my head at 2 in the morning sometimes!
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Right? I’m too lazy to get up and write stuff down though, and poof, it’s gone!
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This is where my messed-up sleep habits come in handy — I was still up. (I also keep post-its and a pen by the bed.) Where I come up with ideas and lose then is in the shower! Why do my revelations happen there??
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Wow, this was good.
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Thanks for reading and for saying this. I appreciate the kind words and feedback!
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My pleasure.
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Lovely writing per usual!
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Aww, thank you! It was so late last night I wasn’t even sure about it when I posted!
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I came across your blog for the first time and I am Just going on reading! I have just kept aside my work and simply iterating the lines of the poems in my mind! I am making each such writer friends of mine read it!!
PS: That was quite ‘too much ‘ mention in a comment but Just couldn’t resist those unrestrained thoughts:-)
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Oh, you can write as much as you want in the comments! I appreciate the feedback and love getting to know people here!
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