#1minfiction | be cool.

“Oh… look at him…”

“I know. Have you ever seen anyone so perfect?”

“It’s almost painful to watch him.”

“He probably sees us staring at him.”

“I wonder if he knows we’re talking about him, too.”

“I’m thinking yes…”

“Damn! Me, too… he’s coming this way.”

“Oh no. Be cool… be cool!”


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This week’s One-Minute Fiction prompt is ‘be cool.’ 

You can find the details at Lovely Curses.




About what sandra thinks

Sandra is a writer, sometimes blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Italy, but she would settle for a non-oceanfront home in Italy. She loves books, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
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57 Responses to #1minfiction | be cool.

  1. The V Pub says:

    I’m spamming. Please go visit my blog.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. How cool it would be to be perfect
    And how perfect to be cool
    I have only myself to measure
    So cannot use that as a rule.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Hahaha! That’s like me trying to be cool if Salma Hayek was walking towards me. Not bloody likely. 😜

    Liked by 2 people

  4. Meg says:

    Oh yes! Great piece of mini fiction! (Nice image, too! 😍)

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Marquessa says:

    Yummy yum yum!

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Cyranny says:

    Nice one, Sandra 🙂 I usually don’t read other’s entries before I write mine, so I don’t get influenced… but I clicked and then I couldn’t unread this 😛 LOL

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Great writing Sandra – now for the sequel “5 minutes later.”

    Liked by 1 person

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  9. Mel Gutiér says:

    Awesome! I’d like to try these.

    Liked by 1 person

  10. manyofus1980 says:

    awesome! really great piece!

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Cute back and forth! I can totally hear it. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

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