beautiful darkness.

beautiful darkness.

they find beauty in stars shining
a dark sky could never compare

in light, they dance and they sing
none brings them only despair

to me, they don’t know anything
brightness brings blinding glare

but when the night is starless
I have beautiful darkness

Stuff you don’t need to know: This poem style is called ottava rima and follows the pattern ab ab ab cc.
©2017 what sandra thinks
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra is a writer, blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Hawaii where she could learn to surf. She loves books, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
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23 Responses to beautiful darkness.

  1. MIKE EYE says:

    What Mike thinks..? Word! Nice!

    Liked by 2 people

  2. See? Told you you’re a writer. 😊

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Beautiful poem 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Love the poem and the floating constellation …

    Liked by 1 person

  5. magarisa says:

    This resonates with me. “Brightness brings blinding glare” – heck yeah!

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Meg Sorick says:

    Nicely done! I like the rhythm of the poem. ❤ It is dreamy!

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Eric says:

    Lovely, Sandra. And a style with which I was not familiar. ❤

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  8. So nice, Sandra! The dark has its uses 😉

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  9. Your words have a strong grip on me. Beautiful.

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