the same rain.

holding

Remember
when she said
she wanted
someone

in her life
to feel
the same rain
she feels?
To break through
the clouds
surrounding her?

She was looking
for you
.

double-s-div

© 2016 what sandra thinks
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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43 Responses to the same rain.

  1. Meg Sorick says:

    Oh my word, WordPress is killing me. I just had to unfollow and follow again for it to let me type here!

    This is sweet. It’s different too because you have the narrator talking to the object of her affection. Very cool! ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Halycon Prana says:

    This transcends the pain of the last 24 hours. Beautiful. Inspiring.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. VictoryInTrouble says:

    Sometimes just to know someone else feels what you feel is enough. Same rain. Very nice. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Miriam says:

    This is beautiful Sandra.

    Liked by 1 person

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