betrayal.

hide.

she trusted you
she opened herself
exposed herself
she let you in

she never suspected
believing in you
was a mistake
she was naïve

you broke her innocence
destroyed her faith
crushed her heart
left her disillusioned

because
she never thought
your words were lies
and your endgame
was betrayal

swash.

© 2016 what sandra thinks
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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40 Responses to betrayal.

  1. The V Pub says:

    Powerful stuff, Sandra, but very dark. Very, very dark.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. I’ve known a couple people like that. They suck! 😃

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Josh Wrenn says:

    Replace the “she”s for “he”s and you got me.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Meg Sorick says:

    Strong words for strong feelings. Been in that position myself in days gone by. And its the worst. ❤ to you.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. I knew it was fiction 😉 And very good, too

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Miriam says:

    Powerful and raw words Sandra, your writing’s so strong. Hugs xo

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Deep, dark, and vulnerable. It’s written exquisitely S.

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