she trusted you
she opened herself
exposed herself
she let you in

she never suspected
believing in you
was a mistake
she was naïve

you broke her innocence
destroyed her faith
crushed her heart
left her disillusioned

she never thought
your words were lies
and your endgame
was betrayal


© 2016 what sandra thinks

About what sandra thinks

Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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40 Responses to betrayal.

  1. The V Pub says:

    Powerful stuff, Sandra, but very dark. Very, very dark.

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  2. I’ve known a couple people like that. They suck! 😃

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  3. Josh Wrenn says:

    Replace the “she”s for “he”s and you got me.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Meg Sorick says:

    Strong words for strong feelings. Been in that position myself in days gone by. And its the worst. ❤ to you.

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  5. I knew it was fiction 😉 And very good, too

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  6. Miriam says:

    Powerful and raw words Sandra, your writing’s so strong. Hugs xo

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Deep, dark, and vulnerable. It’s written exquisitely S.

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