taste: a limerick.

Posted on 9 October 2016 by what sandra thinks

kiss.

You come closer, my weak heart flips
My desire strong, my will eclipsed
One perfect kiss grows into two
I have the delicious taste of you
And forever it will linger on my lips

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Written for Mind and Life Matters limerick poetry challenge – prompt: taste
© 2016 what sandra thinks
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra is a writer, sometimes blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Italy, but she would settle for a non-oceanfront home in Italy. She loves books, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
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29 Responses to taste: a limerick.

  1. Mags's avatar magarisa says:
    9 October 2016 at 8:35 pm

    Sizzling and romantic! You always write about romantic passion so convincingly.

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  3. Kay's avatar Kay says:
    9 October 2016 at 10:11 pm

    Oh that’s lovely!

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  4. Miriam's avatar Miriam says:
    9 October 2016 at 10:31 pm

    So delicious and romantic.

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  5. deleted's avatar VictoryInTrouble says:
    10 October 2016 at 12:11 am

    Mmm delightful!

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  6. Meg's avatar Meg Sorick says:
    10 October 2016 at 8:48 am

    OH yeah! Love it!

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  7. Al Lane's avatar Al Lane says:
    10 October 2016 at 3:01 pm

    So passionate and full of longing ❤

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  9. Prakash Hegade's avatar Prakash Hegade says:
    12 October 2016 at 7:41 am

    That was a hot limerick! 🙂 wow!

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  10. Rashmi Menon's avatar MindandLifeMatters says:
    16 October 2016 at 4:44 pm

    That is such a sweet limerick! 🙂

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