taste: a limerick.

Posted on 9 October 2016 by

kiss.

You come closer, my weak heart flips
My desire strong, my will eclipsed
One perfect kiss grows into two
I have the delicious taste of you
And forever it will linger on my lips

wave short line

Written for Mind and Life Matters limerick poetry challenge – prompt: taste
© 2016 what sandra thinks
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra is a writer, blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Hawaii where she could learn to surf. She loves music, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
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29 Responses to taste: a limerick.

  1. magarisa says:
    9 October 2016 at 8:35 pm

    Sizzling and romantic! You always write about romantic passion so convincingly.

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  3. Kay says:
    9 October 2016 at 10:11 pm

    Oh that’s lovely!

    Liked by 2 people

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  4. Miriam says:
    9 October 2016 at 10:31 pm

    So delicious and romantic.

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  5. VictoryInTrouble says:
    10 October 2016 at 12:11 am

    Mmm delightful!

    Liked by 1 person

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  6. Meg Sorick says:
    10 October 2016 at 8:48 am

    OH yeah! Love it!

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  7. Al Lane says:
    10 October 2016 at 3:01 pm

    So passionate and full of longing ❤

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  9. Prakash Hegade says:
    12 October 2016 at 7:41 am

    That was a hot limerick! 🙂 wow!

    Like

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  10. MindandLifeMatters says:
    16 October 2016 at 4:44 pm

    That is such a sweet limerick! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

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