dark rain.

Posted on 25 September 2016 by

dark rain.

when you left
you stole my sunshine
leaving me cold and lonely
in the dark rain
breaking my fragile heart
like shattering glass
the pieces left behind
cutting me
with every step I take
to reclaim my brilliant light
but you have forgotten
that I find strength
beyond yours
in darkness.

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© 2016 what sandra thinks
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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15 Responses to dark rain.

  1. mandibelle16 says:
    25 September 2016 at 1:06 pm

    Great piece Sandra.

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  2. Eric says:
    25 September 2016 at 8:36 pm

    Painful but beautiful, Sandra 💙

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  3. Wandering Soul says:
    26 September 2016 at 1:55 am

    WOW!! I am on reading spree today and absolutely loved this one . loved the strength that comes from after the feeling of pain and despair. Brilliant. Off to read more.

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  4. Pia Garcia says:
    26 September 2016 at 4:54 am

    Thats nice! 🙂 love it! ❤️

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  5. Cattie's World says:
    26 September 2016 at 7:20 am

    Congrats Girl. Brave Words. ” I find strength beyond yours in darkness.”
    I also grew Strong.

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  6. Meg Sorick says:
    26 September 2016 at 9:34 am

    This is dark with a ray of hope. Forward movement into light. I love it. There’s always someone to ‘break our brittle hearts’!

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  8. Suryanti Musakat says:
    12 December 2016 at 11:51 pm

    Great poem and very deep, Can’t help it but crying 😦

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