wedding: a limerick.

Posted on 5 June 2016 by what sandra thinks

wedding in the rain.

They called me beautiful that night
Amidst rain drops and moonlight
But I have to confess
It was the wrong dress
It never should have been white.

blue hearts.

The prompt included a picture of a lovely wedding sign with attached white balloons flying on a bright lovely day. I did write about a wedding, but not one in daylight… 
Mind and Life Matters limerick poetry challenge – prompt: wedding

About what sandra thinks

Sandra is a writer, blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Italy, but she would settle for a non-oceanfront home in Italy, too. She loves books, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
This entry was posted in challenge, poetry, writing and tagged , , , , . Bookmark the permalink.

44 Responses to wedding: a limerick.

  1. sonofabeach96 says:
    5 June 2016 at 9:23 pm

    I like this take on it. 😃

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  2. fictionalkevin says:
    5 June 2016 at 10:07 pm

    Limericks are supposed to end on a funny. Love this.

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  3. maharedwynn says:
    5 June 2016 at 11:32 pm

    That’s awesome! 😃

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  4. A.C. Melody says:
    5 June 2016 at 11:41 pm

    Love it. ♥ 😀

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  5. Eric says:
    5 June 2016 at 11:57 pm

    This is great! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  7. R 'I' P says:
    6 June 2016 at 12:49 am

    Loved it 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  8. Miriam says:
    6 June 2016 at 6:17 am

    Beautiful. So visual. Loved it.

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  9. Dr Meg Sorick says:
    6 June 2016 at 7:35 am

    I’m thinking there’s a whole lot of wedding dresses that should be ‘not white’ 😀 Grat limerick!

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  10. ranu802 says:
    6 June 2016 at 7:53 am

    Nice limerick, wrong dress it’s okay, it sounds good anyway. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  11. thelonelyauthorblog says:
    6 June 2016 at 8:41 am

    Nobody needs to know. lol

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  12. draliman says:
    7 June 2016 at 4:40 am

    Heh heh, the last line made me smile 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  13. ladieswholunchreviews says:
    8 June 2016 at 12:46 am

    Super funny, as always! I love your sense of humor. I mean, how many of us should have worn — well, something besides white? 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  14. MindandLifeMatters says:
    11 June 2016 at 8:51 pm

    hahahahahaha…..love this one! Too bad the dress was white….but she had fun so who cares! 😀

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

thoughts? talk to me.

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

Gravatar
WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out /  Change )

Cancel

Connecting to %s

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.