goodbye: a limerick.

hallucination.

goodbye.
You grew from my imagination
Your love was my intoxication
Until you said goodbye
I forgot it was a lie –
A beautiful hallucination


Mind and Life Matters limerick poetry challenge – prompt: farewell
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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20 Responses to goodbye: a limerick.

  1. Deb says:

    Excellent! 🙂

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  2. Miriam says:

    Beautifully written.

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  3. That can be an addictive hallucination! Love the limerick!

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  4. Excellent. Perfect. A wonderful read. Sandra I won’t be in WprdPress much durin the next week, so I will miss a few posts. I will try to read as many as I can. Be well.

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  5. This is so wonderful, now I don’t even want to try and write one **pouting **

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  6. Eli Pacheco says:

    Limericks don’t always rhyme with Nantucket, right? This was beautiful. And it speaks to the strength of our imagination, that we could create something so mesmerizing it comes to life.

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