Limerick challenge: Birth
He cannot stop thinking of her –
One day is clear, the next a blur.
But hate is born of love –
Must have below to be above.
Is she joy or tragedy? He’s not sure.
can I help you find something?
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LOVE this. How very hauntingly beautiful. XO
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Thank you, sweetie. 🙂 xo
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Wonderful limerick Sandra.
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Thanks Miriam!
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Ooh, I love it!
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I feel like this could be the beginning of a story… Just saying! 🙂 Loved it!
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Oh… that is a great thought! I think I’m going to have to investigate. In my head. Better put on the hip boots.
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Haha, believe it or not I own hips boots!
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Hahaha…. any particular reason?
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Don’t laugh. I fly fish. 😀 Shit, I can’t even write that without laughing! But it’s true!
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🙂 I was going to say you didn’t have to tell me if it was for some weird fetish thing… so fly fishing is way better than anything I was thinking. (Seriously, something is wrong with me!)
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Yeah there’s nothing sexier than a lady in her fishing gear! LOL!!!!
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Hahaha… Is that what I need to spice things up in the bedroom? Ahh… I see now where I went wrong… 😀
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With the right man? Definitely! LOL like Larry the Cable Guy!!!!!!!!!
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Eww… Larry the Cable Guy. *shudder* He should not be in the same comment as “the right man”! Hahaha
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Yuck! I know!
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This was a haunting write. Well done.
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Thank you. I like Meg’s suggestion that it could be the beginning of a story…
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Yeah, I read that. I think it could. Let it develop in your head. Write some notes too. Sometimes I get a little spark, write down soem ideas, and let it simmers for a week or two. Do that with poems as well.
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Oh yeah, me too. I have a bunch of little docs and lists and snippits. It’s interesting to me that when I return to an old thought, I can see where my original thought was going, but, I find a very different (better?) direction.
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That happened to me as well. That is why it is good to document them.
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Still need to get the waterproof solution so I stop losing those ideas I get in the shower!
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My showering consists of bad singing, so I don’t suffer from this.
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Well written….
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Thank you
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Welcome 🙂
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Oh, this is so good! What a nice twist on the Birth theme.
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Thank you so much!
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The emotional roller coaster of falling in and out of love! Wonderfully rendered! And you have used an amazing image to complement the limerick!
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Thank you so much!
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Congrats! Love this!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Congratulations, Sandra. 🙂
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Thank you!
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Wonderful. Congrats.
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Thank you!
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