born of love.

born of love.

Limerick challengeBirth

He cannot stop thinking of her –
One day is clear, the next a blur.
But hate is born of love –
Must have below to be above.
Is she joy or tragedy? He’s not sure.

 

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Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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37 Responses to born of love.

  1. LOVE this. How very hauntingly beautiful. XO

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  2. Miriam says:

    Wonderful limerick Sandra.

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  3. I feel like this could be the beginning of a story… Just saying! 🙂 Loved it!

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  4. This was a haunting write. Well done.

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  5. Arcane Owl says:

    Well written….

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  6. Elizabeth Helmich says:

    Oh, this is so good! What a nice twist on the Birth theme.

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  7. The emotional roller coaster of falling in and out of love! Wonderfully rendered! And you have used an amazing image to complement the limerick!

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  9. ranu802 says:

    Congratulations, Sandra. 🙂

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  10. Indira says:

    Wonderful. Congrats.

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