the biggest mistake. #poetry

Posted on 31 May 2018 by what sandra thinks

kiss.

The day I finally
let you kiss me
was the day
I made
the biggest mistake
of my life.

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Sandra is a writer, sometimes blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Italy, but she would settle for a non-oceanfront home in Italy. She loves books, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
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36 Responses to the biggest mistake. #poetry

  1. sonofabeach96's avatar sonofabeach96 says:
    31 May 2018 at 12:07 pm

    I’ve had that feeling before. Both in a bad way…and a good way. 😃

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  4. gigglingfattie's avatar gigglingfattie says:
    31 May 2018 at 12:20 pm

    Aw that makes me sad!

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  5. Meg's avatar Meg says:
    31 May 2018 at 12:29 pm

    Yep definitely could go either way… Aw.

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  6. Prog2Goal's avatar The V Pub says:
    31 May 2018 at 1:42 pm

    Perhaps a brilliant mistake?

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  7. Richmond Road's avatar Richmond Road says:
    31 May 2018 at 5:13 pm

    The fact that the day you finally let me kiss you was also the day you made the biggest mistake of your life may have been purely coincidental. That’s what I choose to believe, anyhow.

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  8. TheDreamGirlWrites's avatar TheDreamGirlWrites says:
    1 June 2018 at 3:13 am

    I loved this.. totally bitter-sweet 🙂

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  9. Prior...'s avatar prior.. says:
    2 June 2018 at 12:49 pm

    oh wow – this dense poem has a punch and I know a few folks who could relate.

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  10. rumenations's avatar morganwerhen says:
    11 June 2018 at 3:11 pm

    Sometimes the simplest poem makes a person’s day. It’s sad and hard, and so terribly true. Thank you for writing this.

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  11. Mel Gutiér's avatar Mel Gutiér says:
    19 June 2018 at 12:27 am

    I’m feeling rather cozy after reading this and this entire comment thread… full of coziness! 😍😁😘

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