melted. #poetry

Posted on 10 January 2018 by what sandra thinks

When I found you,
You were strong and dark…
Sweet with just the right amount
Of bitter.

When I left you,
You were weak and pale…
Like iced coffee when the ice
Has melted.

 


©2018 what sandra thinks

About what sandra thinks

Sandra is a writer, sometimes blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Italy, but she would settle for a non-oceanfront home in Italy. She loves books, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
This entry was posted in poetry, writing and tagged , , . Bookmark the permalink.

33 Responses to melted. #poetry

  1. Brian Lageose says:
    10 January 2018 at 2:46 am

    The last two lines are great…

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  2. doodlessworld says:
    10 January 2018 at 3:23 am

    Good one 😊👌👍

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  3. magarisa says:
    10 January 2018 at 3:33 am

    Love the descriptive language and analogy.

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  4. Peter's pondering says:
    10 January 2018 at 7:37 am

    ……but what happened in between? Was anyone to blame? Were they both at fault? Had one changed, and the other remained the same, or had both changed?

    This makes me think….probably too much.

    Excellent!

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  6. Marquessa says:
    10 January 2018 at 8:31 am

    More than coffee…like a partner who pretends to be more than they are and then you find out it was all a façade.
    Beautiful Sandra!

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  7. Meg says:
    10 January 2018 at 8:34 am

    Oooh… this could go either way. Either he was never strong and dark to begin with or the relationship with her drained it all away! Very well done! Leaves it to the imagination!

    Liked by 2 people

    Reply
  8. theacquiescentsoul says:
    10 January 2018 at 1:34 pm

    Holy shit! This is so incredibly deep and charged! Love it!!!’ 💕

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

thoughts? talk to me.

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

Gravatar
WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out /  Change )

Cancel

Connecting to %s

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.