will you miss me? #poetry

[This is really dark… just wanted to warn you. But you know… darkness is my thing.]

Will you miss me
when I’m gone?
Or will I just
fade away
from light to darkness
slowly and quietly?
Will I slip away
to a new lonely
from this old lonely
without a whisper?
Will you look for me
and only then
I am not there?
Will you regret
never noticing
the pain I carried
before I disappeared?
Will you wonder
if you could have
saved me?
Will you wish
you could hold me
one last time?
Will you miss me
when I’m gone?

©2017 what sandra thinks


About what sandra thinks

Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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13 Responses to will you miss me? #poetry

  1. Dark, indeed. But beautiful. 😊

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  2. tarnishedsoul says:

    Dark is the new hot! 😉

    Having had a brother commit suicide, these words have a deep meaning to me.

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  3. jackcollier7 says:

    Bloody sad. Brutally poignant. A great poem that made me feel so bad for her. ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  4. So wonderfully done! This is truly your element in poetry, so poignant

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  5. Poignant piece. I like it. ❤️

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