on loneliness.

This was adapted from a conversation between two characters from my ‘secret book’… I think they’re my favorite characters I’ve ever created…

loneliness

loneliness sucks.
and time
makes it worse…
not better.
you can’t fix it by yourself.
you feel powerless.
it just…
sucks.

and you don’t
have to be
alone
to feel it.

©2017 what sandra thinks
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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21 Responses to on loneliness.

  1. The last stanza is the hardest and saddest part. ❤

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  2. willowwrites says:

    lovely and lonely and true.

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  3. So true. The older I get, the more I realize how many things in life you go through alone.

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  4. Aw yes, beautiful and sad. Don’t you love it when your characters feel so real?

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  5. Meg Sorick says:

    The worst kind of loneliness is the kind when you’re not actually alone. However, soemtimes you have to torment your characters a little bit … knowing that you have the power to fix everything!

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