in the dark.

girl-down

in the dark she cries
cold, alone and heartbroken
dreaming of his love

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©2016 what sandra thinks
[lovely art by Hajin Bae]
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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31 Responses to in the dark.

  1. 😦 I’m not sure how I feel about this one. Too sad!

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  2. Kay says:

    Heartbreakingly beautiful.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Your writing breaks my heart, nearly daily. 😕

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  4. Meg Sorick says:

    Liking this for it’s pain, is a difficult thing to do…. 😦

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  5. Halycon Prana says:

    I like this. For its honesty. It is an authentic emotion. And although it is sadness, pain, it is you sharing a part of you. And that is beautiful. I wish happier days for you.

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  6. VictoryInTrouble says:

    Hmm, I kinda wrote a poem like this yesterday because I’m not feeling good and was in bed freezing… sad. 😦

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  7. Miriam says:

    Beautiful but so sad, too sad … you need some ice cream!

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Deep… I like this… Very sincere. Alot of us can relate to this

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