faith | despair.

Back in June, I experimented with a ‘diamante’ poem — hate-love. Since then, I’ve made a few attempts at writing another, but I haven’t been able to do it. At least not to my liking. Hell, I think this may be the first one I’ve been able to complete! Still, I’m not sure I’m happy with it.
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faith | despair.

Faith
Pure and strong
Hoping, believing, trusting
Always thinking the best. Always getting the worst.
Questioning, falling, losing
Weak and damaged
Despair

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About what sandra thinks

Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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32 Responses to faith | despair.

  1. Lisa Meister says:

    Well I love it, and this is why: I love how you start with faith and all the positives, switch in the middle with faith and then despair, and working your way down to despair. I see it building and falling. Great job!

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  2. tarnishedsoul says:

    Sounds like my life’s story at the moment…

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  3. Eric says:

    Wow! Beautifully done. I think this one is a success. 💕

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  4. I think it’s good. 😃

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  5. Meg Sorick says:

    It’s excellent! Structure and content. The fall into despair… And the image is perfect.

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  6. Nice one. But you know me, I’d like you to flip that and start with despair and end with faith! But that’s just me… 🙂

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    • Oh I’m sure it’s not just you! And I thought about it… but I am SO so very far from having any kind of faith whatsoever that it just felt wrong….

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      • Aww, I’m so sorry. But even when you look at your son and daughter, doesn’t that give you faith in this world? They are the future and look how brilliant they are already!

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        • Oh, it’s okay. I think I’m just pretty cynical at this point… it’s hard for me to have faith. And I am not religious in any way at all, so I don’t have that sort of faith either. I do have faith in my children (though I’m not sure I’ve ever used the word ‘faith’ there!)… but the lack of faith I have in the world itself is a little overwhelming!

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  7. mandibelle16 says:

    This is awesome Sandra. You did a great job of your Diamente. I have only one done poem with a series of Diamente’s (verses) myself. They are extremely difficult to do and it took me a long time before I was satisifed with the poem was well. Great job, you really feel the emotional change occurring.

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  8. I love this! I had never heard of this type of poem before! Or at least the name for it/reasoning behind it. I also like how it works from the bottom to the top too – going from hate into love

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  9. I really like this. Faith is great but hope is the glue that makes it stick together

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  10. VictoryInTrouble says:

    Beautiful job! What’s not to like? It’s perfect!

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  11. magarisa says:

    For what it’s worth, I think you’ve done a great job linking the opposites of faith and despair.

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  12. Miriam says:

    Oh I think you did a great job with this Sandra. The rise and fall of hope faith and despair.

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