
You touch me
My fingers tremble
I find my breath
Only to lose it again
My eyes close
To escape temptation
But I cannot escape
Your hypnotic scent or
The heat of your whisper
On my neck
Your soul is a magnet
Pulling me in
Holding my steel heart
Until it melts
With yours
—♥—
[Inspired by one of my works of fiction… that I may or may not ever share…]
© what sandra thinks
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Sandra is a writer, blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Hawaii where she could learn to surf. She loves books, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
My heart’s a big lump of mush, usually the problem is on the other side… This is a wonderful poem, my friend. ❤
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Thanks Meg. My heart tends toward the mush, too… but then there’s the cold steel that needs melting…
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You need a handsome welder!
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You know… It’s kind of sad… I used to have one!!
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Oh right! The metal sculpture artist! I forgot about that! Damn….
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I know! Kind of wish I kept them all. Ha! As if I could have… like it was all up to me! 😃
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Wow.
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🙂 Thanks
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Lovely!
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Thanks Kay!
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You’re welcome!
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Tease! Share it!!
I love the “heat of your whisper” part. Mmm, could almost feel it.
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It’s something I imagine often… (among other things… lol) Maybe I will share it someday… If I can bear to let my characters go and end it… 🙂
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I’m the worst at endings. Definitely understand!
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It’s hard to let go when I’m totally in love with the guy. (I know… there is something wrong with me…!)
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Nothing wrong with you. Unless there’s something wrong with both of us! 😳😆
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Well, that’s entirely possible! 😀 Haha! (Of course, I’m sure this same thing is wrong with lots of people!)
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Yup! 😀
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Like this a lot. The picture suits well. You writing the word”melt” also made me think of metal “smelting” removing the metal from the ore. The love from your core. Great stuff.
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Thanks so much!
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Very inspiring! I want someone’s whisper on my neck:)
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Me too! 🙂 Hope you’re doing well! 🙂
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I’ve been better, but it’s fine. Awaiting results by end of week…
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Sending hugs
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Thank you! ❤
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