my steel heart.

Posted on 9 August 2016 by

my steel heart.

You touch me
My fingers tremble
I find my breath
Only to lose it again
My eyes close
To escape temptation
But I cannot escape
Your hypnotic scent or
The heat of your whisper
On my neck
Your soul is a magnet
Pulling me in
Holding my steel heart
Until it melts
With yours

—♥—

[Inspired by one of my works of fiction… that I may or may not ever share…]
© what sandra thinks
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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25 Responses to my steel heart.

  1. Meg Sorick says:
    9 August 2016 at 9:45 am

    My heart’s a big lump of mush, usually the problem is on the other side… This is a wonderful poem, my friend. ❤

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  4. VictoryInTrouble says:
    9 August 2016 at 11:16 am

    Tease! Share it!!
    I love the “heat of your whisper” part. Mmm, could almost feel it.

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  5. mandibelle16 says:
    9 August 2016 at 4:04 pm

    Like this a lot. The picture suits well. You writing the word”melt” also made me think of metal “smelting” removing the metal from the ore. The love from your core. Great stuff.

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  6. ladieswholunchreviews says:
    9 August 2016 at 9:02 pm

    Very inspiring! I want someone’s whisper on my neck:)

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