puzzle.

puzzle.

I am a puzzle
with thousands of pieces.
I may never finish
getting myself together
and I may lose a few pieces
along the way
but maybe I’ll only
lose the edges
not the insides.

dots.

© what sandra thinks
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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42 Responses to puzzle.

  1. I love this, but you need all the outside pieces to hold yourself together! Seriously, though, I get what you’re saying, so well put…

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  2. Eccentric Muse says:

    Reblogged this on La Petit Muse and commented:
    I am a puzzle…

    Like

  3. Eccentric Muse says:

    This talked to me. Nice piece.

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  4. The V Pub says:

    You are…….LEGO LADY! Sorry, I couldn’t resist.

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  5. R 'I' P says:

    “but maybe I’ll only
    lose the edges
    not the insides”

    Beautifully written. Loved these lines….

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  6. Miriam says:

    Even if you come apart there’s always a way to be fixed. Great writing Sandra.

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  7. Nice. You sound like some of the toys and a bike I built for my daughter. I put them together without using all of the parts.

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  8. Well with out the outside pieces, you won’t have any sharp edges, at least! 😀 This is a very cool little poem, I like the metaphor a lot!

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  9. Phil Taylor says:

    Nice! The insides are the important part. Great metaphor!

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  10. VictoryInTrouble says:

    Lovely! Perhaps last night was the night for insomnia. I barely slept.
    This reminds me of that John Legend song- “love your curves and all your edges.” Let’s hope we have lots more curves than edges.

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  11. Stay puzzled. Ha
    Great piece

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