the inside.

the inside.

“You keep a lot of secrets
And I keep none
Wish I could go back
And keep some”
. . . . Fireproof / The National

swirl.
I tell you everything
I’m an open book
But your words are few
So much mystery
I want to trust you
And your love for me
But when you hold back
What lives inside you
I wonder what
You could be hiding
Then I see your smile
And you touch me
Your beautiful kisses
Make me tremble
And I forget
That I don’t know
What you’re thinking
I only know the pieces
You let outside
But I want
The inside too
Tell me more

swirl.

♦ what sandra thinks

 

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About what sandra thinks

Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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29 Responses to the inside.

  1. Miriam says:

    Lovely piece of writing Sandra.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Very emotional! And I think many of us can relate, especially when you’re married to the strong, silent type 🙂

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  3. Nice. Words are good, but actions can speak louder!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. R 'I' P says:

    Could relate to your poem…..beautifully wriiten Sandra! God bless

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Lovely write. It is disturbing when one person provides so much information and the other remains a mystery. I don’t think everything in one’s past needs to be revealed.

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  6. Yes! Completely!

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  7. mandibelle16 says:

    Vey well written. I think it’s partially a guy thing. They jus don’t say as much out loud, specially what they “feel.” It takes them along time from my experience.

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  8. mcnerneyblog says:

    Most of the time when you think something sucks it doesn’t! Very well written. Have more faith in yourself. 😊

    Liked by 1 person

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