the inside.

the inside.

“You keep a lot of secrets
And I keep none
Wish I could go back
And keep some”
. . . . Fireproof / The National

swirl.
I tell you everything
I’m an open book
But your words are few
So much mystery
I want to trust you
And your love for me
But when you hold back
What lives inside you
I wonder what
You could be hiding
Then I see your smile
And you touch me
Your beautiful kisses
Make me tremble
And I forget
That I don’t know
What you’re thinking
I only know the pieces
You let outside
But I want
The inside too
Tell me more

swirl.

♦ what sandra thinks

 

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About what sandra thinks

Sandra is a writer, blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Hawaii where she could learn to surf. She loves books, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
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29 Responses to the inside.

  1. Miriam says:

    Lovely piece of writing Sandra.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Very emotional! And I think many of us can relate, especially when you’re married to the strong, silent type 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Nice. Words are good, but actions can speak louder!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. R 'I' P says:

    Could relate to your poem…..beautifully wriiten Sandra! God bless

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Lovely write. It is disturbing when one person provides so much information and the other remains a mystery. I don’t think everything in one’s past needs to be revealed.

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  6. Yes! Completely!

    Liked by 1 person

  7. mandibelle16 says:

    Vey well written. I think it’s partially a guy thing. They jus don’t say as much out loud, specially what they “feel.” It takes them along time from my experience.

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  8. mcnerneyblog says:

    Most of the time when you think something sucks it doesn’t! Very well written. Have more faith in yourself. 😊

    Liked by 1 person

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