unforgiven.

unforgiven.

unforgiven.

I was forgiven
Your words, not mine
But I am confused
Please tell me why
You keep rehashing
Events from the past
I thought it was over
That I’d heard the last
Maybe you cannot
Forget my mistakes
I’ve tried everything
What more does it take?
My memories of us
Now cause me pain
Time for me to move on
Unforgiven I remain


rejected.This is another poem I wrote but rejected during the a-to-z challenge.
And by the way, I’m fine — this is just a poem about those who cannot forgive and about knowing when it’s time to walk away.
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About what sandra thinks

Sandra began writing when she was a sixth grader. She is a teller of stories through poetry, fiction, and tales from her own life. And she thinks too much. Read, think, enjoy, laugh.
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18 Responses to unforgiven.

  1. Once again, such a wonderful way with words. I love what you write!

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  2. Miriam says:

    What a wonderful piece of writing. You always evoke such strong emotions with your words.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. This was a good one! It has a good rhythym to it. I’m glad you saved it for a sunny day (finally, right?!?) 🙂

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  4. Lovely piece of writing.

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  5. O9ooh, very nice!

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