You told me I was perfect
I adored those words
Because to me they meant
Perfect for you
But I was wrong
It was the beginning of our end
The pedestal you built for me
Was too high off the ground
I could not live up to perfect
Could you? Could anyone?
You say you never expected that
But clearly you did –
Because when a single brick
Crumbled to the ground
You pushed me off
Tossed me aside
And ran in the other direction
Maybe we were on the wrong road
And we needed course correction
Every path cannot lead to our destiny
So my journey continues
And I am content with imperfection
But I confess I do wonder
If you found a new statue to worship
Maybe she is your perfect
Until she too crumbles
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Well written Sandra. Perfection is an illusion, it can only lead to crumbled walls.
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Thank you.
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Beautiful! Perfection is the imperfect unicorn.
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Thanks so much.
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How true, when we show that we’re just human, perfect is such a dangerous word… poignant
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I like “perfect” in my fiction sometimes…. but I’m a crazy romantic… that’s not real! But in reality, who can live up to that? Plus perfect is subjective anyway.
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I think like that, too, and was always shocked when a seemingly perfect guy showed chunks in his armor. I’m better accepting reality now, lol, but part of me still longs for perfect…
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It’s impossible not to dream! 🙂
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Perfection does not exist. A poignant write. The illusion or expectations of perfection, will only destroy relationships. Good one.
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I think we find “perfection” in imperfection… My perfect cup of coffee is way too bitter for someone else. Even here, I use perfect is sort of a metaphor for someone wanting you to be what they want instead of being yourself. And thanks! 🙂
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And now you’re going back to my “Misfit Rendevouz.” Understood. People have to accept people as they are and not try to change them. Or realize they are not a good fit and move on. This was a good write. Love the way you ended it too.
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Thank you. I think imperfections are what we love in others… Perfect would be boring if it existed. I think we connect with someone when we “get” their flaws… identify with them or just love them for being who they are. Okay, philosophical rambling over.
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LOL Agreed. I don’t like when people try to change others. Everyone needs to love and accept the imperfections of others.
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My imperfections are irresistible so people love me. It’s my cross to bear… my curse…
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Haha Love you
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Of course you do! love you too… 😘 🙊
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Like the Chimp
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Wonderful lovely write. And like Andrew said, the ending is terrific…
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Thank you! I’ve had bits of this for a while… last night I finally felt like it came together.
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You are most welcome. Smiles
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This was beautifully written, but ultiimately a very sad post! The pursuit of perfection is a fool’s errand, with each quest ending in disaster.
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Thanks Rob. Yeah, perfect is impossible to find. But you’ve got me and I’m close. 😛 (seriously, I am so kidding…!)
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haha! Here’s a song for you:
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Perfectly Imperfect. That’s how we all are. Beautiful write. 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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This was an awesome piece of writing. And Sandra, you will always be imperfectly perfect to me. 😊
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Quit making me blush! 🙂 Okay, no, don’t… I kind of love it…
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Good. Cause I wasn’t gonna stop anyways! 😉
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Kind of thought (hoped) that’s what you were going to say… ☺
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“Perfect is a delusion created by centuries of ideological fantasy…knowing you’re worthy of being loved for being your best self is all anyone ever has to offer”
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How are you always so Perfect when it comes to expressing regular thoughts like this!
‘ Imperfection ‘ is nearly perfect out here!
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Oh… I’m not perfect but thank you so much for such a wonderful compliment! You’re so kind. And I’m so happy to know you enjoyed reading!
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I always enjoy reading your posts! They are a treasure , lady ! I was bit out of blogging due to exams, and after the few days leave, when I come across such posts, I am Just floored!
Came up with a new post myself, do check it out.Your views really matter to me!
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Thanks again. I promise I will visit!
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Yeah sure! I will look forward to your views! Have a nice weekend!
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