Try this one — my favorite
You’re not supposed to be here.
Don’t worry, I waited ‘til I was alone.
Before you brought me this lacey thing?
Yes because I knew I had to see you
Wearing this one immediately
I can be quiet, I promise
No one will ever know
I’ll keep whispering as long as
We’re here in this tiny space but
I can’t promise to keep my hands
To myself when you show me how
Deliciously sexy you look in this
Tiny black thing that had to be
Made for you… only for you
Or maybe it’s really for me
[It’s all about the shape… I hope it looks as it should whether laptop or phone or tablet…]
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He’s going to love this! The photo is small but still viewable on my phone.
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What about the shape of the words? Can you see that? It looks all right on my phone, but better on the laptop.
And thanks!
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Curving in and out? Is that what you mean? Like a woman’s body? Because yes!
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Exactly! It started looking like that on its own, so I finished it that way! 🙂
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Very cool!
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It’s looking “womanly” on laptop 😉
Tablet decided to call it quits 😦 so I can’t check there .
And phone …what is that ? 😉
—
Dear J. may start getting a little jealous of a certain simian , just saying 😉
Turtle Hugs
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Ha! Oh, please… no he won’t! You’re hilarious. 😀 He doesn’t read this or even know where to find it… plus… he’d probably skip all the poetry even if he did (Mr. Unpoetic)… and he’s not the jealous type… which is kind of disappointing because I would be touched if he got all possessive sometimes… but that’s a story for an entirely separate piece. 😉
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Trust me , dear Sandra no matter how much romantic you may find a man getting jealous or possessive with you ; you don’t want to go there 😉 Leave it just for the stories 🙂
Turtle Hugs 🙂
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Okay, not like that! I mean just jealous enough to notice how amazing I am so he doesn’t take me for granted… [I have been spending a LOT of time working on ‘how I met their father’… it’s making me frustrated with parts of my life…]
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Maybe he Knows how Amazing you are ! and doesn’t take you for granted ?? 🙂 just doesn’t show it 😉
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Actions speak louder than… no actions. 😀 If he never shows it, it might as well not even be there! Just like… if I’m never allowed to drink the wine, I might as well not even have it in the house!
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“maybe” you are right !
did you do it like you taught me to ???
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I went to the “edit” screen where I could use actual html tags… but it did work in the regular comment box when I tested it before! Maybe it needs to be on its own line?
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now you totally lost me 😉
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sorry , apparently the “emoji trick” doesn’t work here 😦 need more lessons 😉
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Fixed it for you. Shows for me now. 🙂
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And we have a Turtle ( rounded like me 😉 )
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Haha!
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Oh, love this!
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Thanks! 🙂
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YES I LOVE IT. Oh man. This was so good. “Tiny black thing that had to be, Made for you… only for you, Or maybe it’s really for me.” That is such a perfect description of lingerie. Made for you but it’s really for me. That was such a perfect finale. Oh, you nailed this one. Bravo.
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Oh…thanks! This makes me smile. I’m so glad you enjoyed it… When the words started making the perfect shape (I hope it looked like an hourglass on your laptop / tablet / phone!), I had to go with that. But still had to make it to that ending!
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Yeah, I loved the shape. I love women with curves. lol You are terrible. You bring out the bad boy in me. It was the perfect ending. So, happy to read this piece.
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I tend to do that…. Bring out the bad boys. And be terrible. It’s my curse. And if you don’t tell me what I should call you, I’m going to pick which can only go poorly… for you… 😛
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Andrew or Drew. I did that in a previous comment. I love both names. You can call me Chimp as well. Smiling. That’s your curse?? LOL
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One of many curses…! Don’t tell anyone but I once had a man ask how I managed to make him dirtier after showering than he was before. But I’m pretty sure he knew the answer.
See? Very bad. Bringing out the bad boy since 19##! (hey, I’m not telling how long I’ve been so terrible)
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lol I love that… So you’ve been bringing out the bad boys for ## years. Wow. lol
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A lady does not reveal her age. And neither do I. 😀
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LOL You are a lady. And I agree with ou 100%. A lady’s age is not a topic of discussion.
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🙂
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Haha! Magically delicious! I loved this post, Sandra, but I’m not sure that I’ll ever see Lucky Charms in the same way again. 😀
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I can’t take full credit for that part – Andrew started it. (Well, maybe I did since his supermarket poem was my fault in the first place.)
And yes… we actually have a box in the house and when I asked what the kids wanted for breakfast, one of them said Lucky Charms and I lost it!
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