in other words. #socs #poetry

Posted on 3 February 2018 by what sandra thinks

I wrote this in about 30 seconds… no editing. Must be inspiration from my overly romantic ‘secret book‘ which I have been editing. For fun. Yes, I edit for fun.

best.

in other words.

you make me smile
despite my sadness
and when I’m near you
I feel this warmth
this comfort
I feel with no other
you alone
take the loneliness away
crush the demons
that stole my heart
so you can take it
for your own
in other words…
I love you.

red hearts.

Written for Stream of Consciousness Saturday… (and for me)… prompt: in other words.
©2018 what sandra thinks

About what sandra thinks

Sandra is a writer, sometimes blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Italy, but she would settle for a non-oceanfront home in Italy. She loves books, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
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16 Responses to in other words. #socs #poetry

  1. Peter's pondering says:
    3 February 2018 at 4:22 pm

    No better audience to write for than for yourself. Lovely, well done!

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  2. Miriam says:
    3 February 2018 at 4:49 pm

    Beautiful ❤️

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  3. Meg says:
    3 February 2018 at 7:16 pm

    No reason to edit this one at all! Beautiful!

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  5. ladieswholunchreviews says:
    3 February 2018 at 8:23 pm

    Exactly how love should be!

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  6. sorryless says:
    4 February 2018 at 1:29 pm

    Thirty seconds? You wrote this in thirty seconds?!!!

    Girl, you have some beautiful roam to the words you let loose.

    Peace

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