My a-to-z theme is supposed to be small. My posts have been that. But, let’s face it… my real theme is poetry. I pretty much figured this would happen, but I thought I’d come clean and admit it. I hope you’re enjoying my alphabet.
i is for illusion.
Born from imagination
Reality could never match
The vision in her mind
He was not supposed to exist
She invented him from dreams
Yet his lines were perfect
Spoken in deepest whispers
Like he read from a script
Of the very words she wrote
She reveled in the illusion
But weakness and greed stepped in
Imagination tainted
Anticipation gone
Illusion shattered
Desperate for the fantasy
Was better than having it
Loved this poem Sandra.
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Thanks Miriam.
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So cool, loving it! You do poetry beautifully…
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Thanks Diane!
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Love this, relate to this. Damned reality, anyway!
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Yes – definitely… reality is kind of a bitch. 😀
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Lovely poem! (Sad reality.) 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂 And yes…so true…
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Oooooh
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🙂
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You really did a great job with illussion. The first tweo lines opened this well. But I especially loved —-> Anticipation gone,Illusion shattered
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Thanks… I went a little back and forth with this… End, beginning, end parts of middle, etc. And then I removed half of the middle… lol
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It worked. This was really good. Funny how this starting from the end has worked out so well for us. I have a piece I am trying to prep for tomorrow that I am jumping back and forth between end and beginning. We are crazy!!!
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I know. And then sometimes when I think I’m done, I start rearranging… But of course I have to save every version in case I decide one of the previous was better…
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Hahaha, We go through the exact same torture. The next time I am pulling hairs from my skull I will remember you.
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Thank you? Haha.
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