Will broken
be repaired
while I
am still here
to feel
together?
©2017 what sandra thinks
Liam Sullivan's Ideas and Reflections
Wordpress simulcast of the official A to Z Challenge blog
the fictional journal of Katie K.
“Love recognizes no barriers. It jumps hurdles, leaps fences, penetrates walls to arrive at its destination full of hope.” — Maya Angelou
Photos, art, and a little bit of LIT.
A Look on the Brighter Side of Life
The image you selected is profound for this poem…
Isn’t a house a solid reflection of a relationship/marriage?
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Thank you. ♥ I think that’s true about a house. Ironically, my house needs repairs and my marriage is not fabulous… not horrible, but not fabulous…
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I understand completely.
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I know you do.
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I sure hope so. 😊
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Me, too!
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Hope. That’s the key word, my dear. No matter what, don’t lose that.
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Some days, I do lose it. But today, so far, feeling okay. 🙂
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Right on! Ok, let’s talk about something fun then. What are you listening to today?
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Oh my god… it’s funny you should ask that because my daughter has been surfing music channels… and she just stopped on the stupidest song ever… it’s by Ayo & Teo and it’s called Rolex. Oh god… it’s awful… yet it makes me laugh. She doesn’t like it either but she laughs hysterically… and when she does, that makes me laugh, too.
(Okay… that is over now and she changed it to Coldplay… thank god!)
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I don’t know this song or artist, but I’m gonna have to check it out on my lunch break. I’ll give ya’ my critique in a bit, but laughing is never a bad thing. 😃
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Oh… it’s terrible. The epitome of today’s crap music, in my opinion. But I hope you get a laugh.
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We shall see. 😃
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Ok. That was 2 1/2 minutes I’ll never get back. Is that actually a song? On an actual album? That somebody would actually purchase?!? And listen to? If this is what’s popular, I’m changing careers. Obviously musical talent isn’t necessary to be a musician anymore. That was awful. 😃
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Told you!! So bad. Rolly rolly.
(To be fair… even my 9-yr-old daughter doesn’t like that crap… she likes other popular stuff that I don’t but nothing this bad!)
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You remember that stupid song from a few years ago, “What Does The Fox Say?”, or whatever it was titled? I rennet thinking it was a joke or a parody, until my wife informed me that actually was a real recorded song. I had the same feeling about this one. 😃
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And… Um… ‘Who Let the Dogs Out’… Ugh!
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Yeah, that one was pretty bad too. Any song that repeats the same line over and over and over, I could do without. 😃
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Same here.
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After about the 10th repetition, I’m kinda done. 😃
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Been reading ‘The Sentence as a Poetic Form’ (by Young and Buckley). Yours is a fine addition to the form.
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Thank you so much. I should check that out.
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Yes. I know it will.
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I hope so!
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I hope it will! ❤️
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Me, too… ❤
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I feel this
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❤
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Powerful poem in so few words. ❤
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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