Yet another ‘making this up as I go’ story. Don’t know why I do this to myself…
back to you. part 3. [previous: part 1 | part 2]
Dani: are you awake?
Dani: please be awake…
Dani. It was Dani. Ava, thank you for forgetting your phone. Adam stared at the screen for a moment that felt like an eternity. Finally, he took a deep breath and before he realized what he was doing, he started typing.
Ava’s phone: yes… I’m awake.
Not technically a lie.
Dani: thank god. I need you.
With a long, deep sigh, Adam felt his heart pound in his chest. All he could think was, ‘My God, I need you, too.’ But he couldn’t type those words.
Ava’s phone: what’s wrong?
Dani: I can’t sleep
Ava’s phone: me either
Still not technically a lie.
Dani: I can’t stop thinking
Ava’s phone: about what?
Dani: everything
Ava’s phone: could you be more specific?
Dani: I don’t know
Ava’s phone: are you okay?
Dani: I don’t know that either
She wasn’t okay. He knew she wasn’t okay. And he knew he had to tell her she wasn’t talking to Ava.
Ava’s phone: Dani… Ava’s asleep
Dani: please don’t go…
Ava’s phone: I’m not going anywhere. But Ava is sleeping
Dani: please stop messing with me… I need to talk this through
He couldn’t bring himself to abandon her when she so desperately needed to talk. He was being a friend. Or he was rationalizing because he didn’t want to let her go.
Ava’s phone: okay… then talk to me
Dani: where do I start?
Ava’s phone: anywhere
Dani: remember when we were kids we would do that question thing?
Ava’s phone: ten questions?
Dani: and you have to be totally honest no matter what the questions are?
Ava’s phone: I remember
Adam did remember. Ava and Dani tried to pull him into their silly game all the time.
Dani: can we do that?
Ava’s phone: ok
Dani: ask me… maybe I can sort out my thoughts
He knew he needed to tell her she was talking to him. And not just by repeating that Ava was asleep. She had to know she was talking to Adam. But he wanted to be there for her. And Ava really was asleep. He didn’t want to leave Dani alone with no one to talk to. And he never lied about who he was. He just left out vital information.
Dani: please?
Ava’s phone: who’s your best friend in the world?
Dani: oh come on… you always ask me that… you know it’s you
But her best friend wasn’t Adam. It was Ava.
Ava’s phone: I told you already… Ava’s asleep
Dani: yeah, whatever you say. please just ask me…
Ava’s phone: how do you feel? right now, no thinking… just tell me…
Dani: scared… am I making a mistake?
Ava’s phone: marrying Finn? Do you love him?
Adam didn’t want to see her answer. He knew what it was but he wasn’t sure he could handle seeing it. Maybe he was punishing himself for not blurting out who she was talking to.
Dani: I do but I shouldn’t feel like this if I’m doing the right thing, should I?
Ava’s phone: hey I thought I was asking the questions…
No response.
Ava’s phone: I’m just teasing… but I can’t tell you if you’re making a mistake…
Even though a huge part of him wanted to tell her just that. Don’t marry him. It’s a mistake.
Ava’s phone: do YOU think you’re making a mistake?
Dani: I don’t know. I’ve been lying here in bed staring at my dress for hours and I can’t sleep and I can’t relax. I know Finn loves me… he’s good to me… but…
Ava’s phone: is he the one? who’s the love of your life? is it him?
Adam held his breath. Her next words would break his heart and he had no idea why he asked that question. In some messed up, masochistic way, maybe he thought it would help him to see Finn’s name
Ava’s phone: Dani? the love of your life… c’mon… who?
Dani: I think you know
Ava’s phone: tell me…
©2017 what sandra thinks
Yep, this seems like a no-win for Adam. If she says he’s not, heartbreak. If she’s says it is him, what the duck does he do now? Hmmmm. 😊
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It always has to be complicated… 🙂 And thanks for reading!
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Ha! Doesn’t it though? And, of course I’m reading. No thanks necessary. 😃
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I kind of hate how Friday is a slow day… it kills my fiction-writing confidence. But “Fiction Monday” sounds ridiculous!
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Hmmm. We’ll have to come up with some alliteration to go with Mondays. “Fuck! It’s Monday again!” doesn’t really work, does it? 😃😃
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Haha. Everything seems to go with Friday. Even Fucking… Fucking Friday… but everyone loves Friday! I could just make up something that has nothing to do with a day of the week (like the perk) but… I like the friday thing… and it makes me kind of keep a schedule…
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Yep, everything’s better on a Friday…even fucking! 😃😃
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LOL… Sadly, I don’t remember.
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Man oh man, not sure how you deal. My head would explode. No pun intended. 😏
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Ahahahaa… 😀 Well, I will always have me, plus accessories as desired. Not the same… but what else can I do? I’m not the cheating kind. (Not that I have anyone to cheat with anyway. Not that I’ve looked either.)
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I’m glad to hear that. That’s never a good solution. EVER. I have a friend who’s dealing with that kinda fallout. It ain’t pretty. And it only makes things worse. I admire your position on that, and I doubt you’d go that route even if the opportunity presented itself.
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Full disclosure… I have had such fantasies… but they’re usually with guys I don’t know… and won’t be meeting, like, ever. And those are fantasies. In reality, I’m a shit liar. I couldn’t do anything like that even if I wanted to…
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Hahaha! Yeah, even my wife and I have our chosen “free pass”. Of course, neither will ever happen, so it’s really a hollow gift. 😃
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My free pass has a list on it. I need to get my ass to Hawaii. 😛
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Hahaha! Book her, Dan-O? 😃
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McGarrett is dreamy. He’ll be in my living room in 35 minutes…
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Oh lord! The countdown is on! 😃😃
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It’s the season finale… I’m sure there will be lots of excitement. Well, there’s excitement for me every week but that’s got nothing to do with plot. 😀
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Season finale? What are you gonna do all summer?!? Hope you DVR’d it or that it’s on Netflix. 😃
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Oh… it’s on Netflix. 🙂
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Whew. 😃
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What the “duck”?!? Stupid autocorrect!!! Nobody in the history of anybody has ever said “what the duck”. I typed fuck, I meant fuck! 😃😃
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I thought you were trying to be polite. LOL (Which, of course, is not necessary with me…) 😀
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Well, I am polite, in general. But in this instance, wasn’t necessarily my goal. 😃😃
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Yeah… there are lots of times when it’s not my goal. 😀
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Hahaha! Well, there are certainly situations where being polite is the last thing on my mind. That’s the case more and more the older I get. I fear I’ll eventually turn into a crotchety old dude telling everybody to fuck off. 😃
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I’m already there. Except not a dude. 😀
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Hahaha! You’re a trip! 😃😃
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Wow, this is so intense. I was feeling Adam’s anguish while reading this.
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I was going to say I’m happy about that but that seems cruel… I don’t want you to feel anguish! But I think you know what I mean. 🙂
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I know what you mean, Sandra. ♥
Great writing!
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Thanks ♥
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Great writing!
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Thanks so much!
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I think maybe she knows who has her friend’s phone. But maybe not…
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Denial? Or such a mess she doesn’t realize? Hmm…
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Hi again, since I’m new to WordPress I’m not sure if I tagged you correctly in my post… but I nominated your blog for the Versatile blog award! Here’s my post about it: https://tiredmindtypingfingers.wordpress.com/2017/05/12/the-versatile-blogger-award/
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Thank you! 🙂
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No problem! 🙂
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This is fabulous! You’ve left us hanging at just the right spot. Since I’m so late to reading, I scanned through your comments too and I agree about Fiction Friday. How about Writing Wednesday or Storytelling Saturday or Sunday? Because Friday has to be the slowest day on here. And more people should read this!!!
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I think the weekends suck a little, too. Typewriter Tuesday? I need a good name… I hate that nothing sounds as good as “Fiction Friday”…!
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I know! And it is a ‘thing’ but still … I like typewriter Tuesday, that’s good!
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And then I get to make new little title graphics for the posts… since I will stop using the fiction friday ones, of course. I like doing that… maybe this has multiple benefits… 🙂
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Yes! Those are really cool! So definitely multiple benefits!
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I need multiple benefits.
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😀
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I love this, and as to titles, how about Tantalising Tuesday Tales, Tuesday Titilations, Telling tales Tuesday?
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Thanks. 🙂 I experimented with Tuesdays but it seemed I still did get more traffic on Fridays… so I went back!
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