This was adapted from a conversation between two characters from my ‘secret book’… I think they’re my favorite characters I’ve ever created…
loneliness sucks.
and time
makes it worse…
not better.
you can’t fix it by yourself.
you feel powerless.
it just…
sucks.
and you don’t
have to be
alone
to feel it.
©2017 what sandra thinks
About what sandra thinks
Sandra is a writer, sometimes blogger, poet, artist, emotional disaster. She thinks far too much and sleeps far too little. Sandra lives in the Northeastern U.S. but dreams of an oceanfront home in Italy, but she would settle for a non-oceanfront home in Italy. She loves books, brutal honesty, coffee, and the color black. She hates insincerity, beer, whipped cream, and facebook. And she is uncomfortable talking about herself in the third person.
The last stanza is the hardest and saddest part. ❤
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I think so, too… ❤
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lovely and lonely and true.
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thanks so much…
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you’re welcome.
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So true. The older I get, the more I realize how many things in life you go through alone.
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It’s true… and it’s pretty sad. (Of course in my “secret book”, eventually, there was little loneliness… because I wrote it that way…)
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Aw yes, beautiful and sad. Don’t you love it when your characters feel so real?
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I do! I have spent years with these particular ones… I’d love to live in their world…
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I’d love to live in my characters’ world too.
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The worst kind of loneliness is the kind when you’re not actually alone. However, soemtimes you have to torment your characters a little bit … knowing that you have the power to fix everything!
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Yeah… full perfection isn’t as interesting. I guess. Except to me… I’m totally interested in that… haha
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Fiction is all about good vs evil, overcoming adversity. So you have to give them at least a little grief before the happily ever after! 😜
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Not if it’s just for me…
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You have a point!
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And really… let’s face it, everything I write is just for me… it’s not like I’m publishing or anything…
BTW… how do you feel about muffins?
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I still think you should think about publishing…
I love muffins!!! Are you going to guest post for me this week?
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I haven’t done anything yet… I don’t think I’ll be ready in time… What day? I further and I’m to lazy to look back… 😄
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I’ve been posting on Tuesday. But don’t worry, I baked today so if you want to plan for next Tuesday, that would be awesome!
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I have to choose the proper muffin… you know, the one I want to eat. hahaha… I will let you know asap!
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Ok! Sounds good!
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