“You keep a lot of secrets
And I keep none
Wish I could go back
And keep some”
. . . . Fireproof / The National
I tell you everything
I’m an open book
But your words are few
So much mystery
I want to trust you
And your love for me
But when you hold back
What lives inside you
I wonder what
You could be hiding
Then I see your smile
And you touch me
Your beautiful kisses
Make me tremble
And I forget
That I don’t know
What you’re thinking
I only know the pieces
You let outside
But I want
The inside too
Tell me more
♦ what sandra thinks
Lovely piece of writing Sandra.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Very emotional! And I think many of us can relate, especially when you’re married to the strong, silent type 🙂
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Yes… I also think it’s a man thing. I have trouble keeping thoughts to myself (no surprise that I write), but men don’t seem to have any trouble with that.
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Exactly! I always say when I have a problem, everyone knows, lol. How are things with you?
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I’m okay. Nothing special to report… LOL
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Well, okay Is good!
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Nice. Words are good, but actions can speak louder!
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True… but I tend to question everything… So I worry that if I assume I know what’s going on in someone’s head based on their actions, I could be totally wrong!
I was not so sure about this post… last night I had nothing ready for today… I wrote this between 1 and 1:30 am. I was pretty sure it sucked. 😀
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Well it certainly doesn’t suck! 😃 It’s lovely writing!
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Thanks… Difficult to judge when I’m trying to get my ass to bed before Seth Meyers says good night… 😀
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Ah, I know… Some of my best ideas hit me at 3 am. That’s my “witching hour” – I slam wide awake and can’t fall back to sleep!
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Sometimes I feel like I can’t write when it’s daylight. Maybe I’m a vampire.
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Could relate to your poem…..beautifully wriiten Sandra! God bless
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Thanks so much!
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You’re welcome
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Lovely write. It is disturbing when one person provides so much information and the other remains a mystery. I don’t think everything in one’s past needs to be revealed.
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No, we all need to keep some things to ourselves…
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Kitten stepped on the keyboard and sent it off before I was finished. Yeah, there is no need for that. Sharing our histories is all apart of earning trust.
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Yes! Completely!
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I love when people get me! 🙂
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I feel the same way…smiles.
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Vey well written. I think it’s partially a guy thing. They jus don’t say as much out loud, specially what they “feel.” It takes them along time from my experience.
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Thank you! Yeah… men do not share like women do, that’s definitely true!
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Most of the time when you think something sucks it doesn’t! Very well written. Have more faith in yourself. 😊
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You’re right… and I do have a little trouble getting worst-case-scenarios out of my head. I shouldn’t let them get in there in the first place! Thanks very much for your very kind comment. 🙂
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The blogosphere will support you.
I will support you
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Thanks again… I appreciate the support very much!
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😊
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