we used to sip coffee every day
now I sit alone with my warm mug
remembering every detail of
our love lost
the laughter and sweet smiling glances
your hand covering mine the first time
our silly talks that could have gone on
forever
the way your eyes mirrored mine that night
moments before our delicious kiss
you stole my breath and I had to have
another taste
precious words of love rolled off your tongue
as we collapsed in each other’s arms
the beautiful love we made all night
was heaven
you promised I was your only girl
I trusted you and believed in us
and I whispered the words you wanted
I love you
but we crashed as quickly as we rose
with tears I lost you and you lost me
I still miss you but my pain eased and
left me numb
we used to make sweet love every night
now, alone, I stare at the ceiling
remembering every detail of
our love lost
Sweet and melancholy at once.💜 Beautiful.
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Thank you… ♥
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You’re welcome!
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Beautiful ❤
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Thanks!
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A powerful poem about lost love. This may very well be your best one yet.
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Thanks. Maybe I should be concerned about how easy it is for me to write tragedy and loss…?
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Good writing comes from emotions. The emotions that resonate most in us are the painful ones, thus better writing comes from our tragedies.
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Well yes… I know this. It explains why reading my own words can make me cry sometimes… and why I should thank anyone who has ever hurt me…? Okay, I’m not sure I would go that far…
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Exactly. NO don’t go that far.
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No…I certainly don’t intend to email my ex and say thanks for treating me like trash… that would be crazy…
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You are a special butterfly. No need to do anything insane like that.
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No… I actually just used that to write something fucking hot… sorry dirty mouth
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Well where the hell is that freaking hot post? Holding out on us????
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I am proofreading right now. Keep it in your pants….
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I’m not wearing any pants….
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That’s what all guys on the internet say…… I’m about to hit it.
The publish button, I mean, perv. 😛
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You can hit whatever you please…
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An invitation? As far as “whatever” goes… I take requests….
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lol
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A feeling so many of us have had. Haunting words for sure.
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And it sucks.
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It does.
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What a moving piece. The emotional connection is extremely strong. Quite Brilliant Ma’am. ❤️
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Thank you… it’s amazing how I always manage to find enough pain inside myself to write all this tragic shit. Actually maybe not so amazing…!
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We write what we feel or what we long to feel. Just write, the how and what don’t matter as much as the do. 😃
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Definitely don’t long to feel this. 🙂
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No, l’m sure you don’t. But not feeling anything isn’t the answer either.
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I know… (sorry… today sucks a little)
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Sorry Sweetie. I’m here if you need me. ❤️
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Thank you doll…. I need an off switch for my brain…. I cannot explain why it does some things to me! xo
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NO SHIT! An off switch would be AMAZING! For some people, I wish their mouth had one too. 😉
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Oh… you make me laugh… thanks for that sweetie…I needed it. I need lots of other stuff too… but there see geographical constraints… so I’m writing about those instead…
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Keep writing. Your words will help you release and lead to release for others too. I mean, DAMN GIRL, you write some HOT SHIT! 🔥🔥🔥😉
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Thank you. 🙂 And I just posted some fresh “hot shit”… 😉
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AWESOME!!! 😃
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Aww 😢
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Weird that I “liked” your tears… but you know what I mean. 🙂 Thanks.
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Yes I know. 💕
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♥
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You express yourself so beautifully
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Thank you so much for the lovely compliment. Made me smile.
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I feel like this is where my relationship is headed 😦
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Aww… I’m sorry. Hugs!
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