I am weak
And I am afraid
To tell you
That I am in love
With your eyes
With the sound of your laugh
And your voice
(Deep and sexy and perfect)
With your thoughts
And how you read mine
(Even though
You don’t know you can)
With the way
You think you’re just a man
(And you are
A sweet, beautiful man
But not ‘just’
You are so much more)
With your touch
When your skin brushes mine
You may think
I don’t even notice
But I do
Because it makes me tingle
(Everywhere)
My heart forgets to beat
And I try
To remember to breathe but
I struggle
Because I am weak and afraid
To tell you
That I am in love
With you
can I help you find something?
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Loved it 🙂
Sorry that is not very eloquent , but it is what I feel
Turtle Hugs
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And I appreciate you telling me that you loved it… in any words. 🙂 ♥
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🙂
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Very deep and powerful poem, I remember times where I cared about a girl soo much, but sometimes those ‘What if’s’ really screw with you. Not exactly something I would like to picture all the time, but it is rather intense emotions that bubbled to the surface while reading this poem. So bravo! 🙂
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Thank you so much! I have been there… and at times, I still wonder “what if” about some of them! Thanks again for your thoughts. 🙂
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Such beautiful passion in this piece. Your style lends itself to music very much. Loved it!
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Wow, thank you! Of course, I couldn’t write accompanying music if I tried….! 🙂
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Do you mind if I elect this one as my favorite. This is so good. You know I am going through my whole lovefest and you come and right one so beautiful. Great work.
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You can have any (or as many) favorites as you want… This one is my favorite right now, too. It fascinates me how often the ones that fly out of me in minutes are better than the ones I spend longer on. And by the way — the last four lines were the first ones I wrote — I so so agree with you on the start-at-the-end thing. It works miracles.
And thank you so much for the lovely compliment — I’m so flattered and my son just asked me what I was smiling at. I didn’t want to say ‘a guy on the internet’ because he will totally repeat that to my husband. Ha! 😀
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Applauding. Sometimes, the ifrst idea is the best, and you use them as the ending. So wonderful to know it worked for you. This piece was wonderful. I just read it again. Haha. You should have said it was a chimp on the internet. LOL
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I’ll have to remember that! Haha!
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Great emotive language! I felt each line! 🙂
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Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it.
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Thanks for leaving the link so I could check it out!
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🙂
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Have a great weekend!
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You too!
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I felt like I should post something here. I don’t want you all to think I’m just a nerd. Or a stalker. Or some creepy combination of those things.
I wrote this a few weeks ago. I have no idea how to judge whether poetry is good or bad or right or wrong. I really know very little about poetry. When I started writing it, I thought it would go very poorly and I’d hate it. But people liked it and I enjoyed it way more than I expected. Now I can’t stop writing it. (Except today… when my brain is as empty as Kim Kardashian’s.)
Hope you like it. (Sorry Meg and Rob… I know you’ve already seen this… not sure about anyone else!)
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So sweet! You’re so talented!💕
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Aww, thank you! ♥
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