This is a repost from November 2015.
This was adapted from a short story I wrote about 15 years ago.
Her shoulders rose and fell with her sigh. She knew he was there. She could feel his heart pounding the whole time.
Holding his breath, he stared as she slowly turned around. His hand covered her cheek and he watched her lips silently trace the shape of his name. His fingers sank into her hair and pulled her closer. He had to have her mouth.
She tried to fight his kiss, but the taste of him filled her with years of memories. And love. She grabbed his face in her hands. It would not be their last kiss.
Wow! That was intense!🔥🔥🔥
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Oh… thank you! ♥
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Over the 15 years, your talent has definitely not faded.👍
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Thanks! It is mind blowing to hear things like this because before I shared and got feedback from the blogging world, I assumed my writing was ridiculous drivel that no one would want to read! Maybe it was that one ‘friend’ way back who told me something I wrote was ‘so contrived’… and the other one who told me not to even consider trying to get published!
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Well, they couldn’t find a clue if you handed
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*if you handed it to them*😊
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🙂 Thanks ♥
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Aww, I like it! Gives me a good sigh.
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I’m glad. I’m still recycling… not doing so well with writing new stuff lately. Although I did come up with an idea today. Yay!
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Oh that’s good!
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Oh, love it! Yes, intense!
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Thanks. I’m hoping I can write something new soon… I’m running out of things to recycle…
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Don’t stress about it, it will pass. It happens to everyone periodically especially during busy and/or stressful times (like the holidays). Besides, I’m thinking that there’s more to the story that you posted last Friday (or was it the ones before…) about the mystery man?
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The one who didn’t come for coffee? That bit is from my “pet story” as I call it. I don’t know if I’ll ever be able to share it…
Yeah… stressful times. Like the last couple years of my life… especially the last 6-8 months. UGH. Christmas is just magnifying it. Can’t wait ’til January!
I did have an entirely separate idea this afternoon. I was thinking this time, I might actually try to make an outline first… of course, I have no idea what I’m doing with that…
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Yay! Just list the major events of the story and tie them up! That’s all I do with an outline! 😃
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Going to need to come up with some major events. Haha! No, I kind of have something… but it will be boring if I don’t make it more substantial…
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I can’t wait!
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It’s probably going to be a while… I came up with, like, 3 or 4 scenes… I don’t have enough plot. This is why I don’t think I’m a real writer. I never have enough story…
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Not true. You did a great job with secret admirer. It’s a matter of asking what happens next. And what could possibly go wrong! 😬 that’s where the fun begins. 😀
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Well… You may remember I had a little help… 🙂
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😀😀😀
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Beautiful. Full of emotion and longing. Nothing wrong with recycling short pieces like this ❤️
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Thanks ♥
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❤
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